Those changes look good - thanks!I think I would say something that makes it a bit clearer you are also looking for people that don’t own planes. Maybe the second sentence should start with something like, “If you already own a plane and would consider leasing it to the club, please also contact us”.
Also end with something like “We look forward to answering any questions you may have and having you join.”
I got an email today from a person who offered some local insight and would spread the word and ask around about aircraft, though he did not have a personal need to join the club. Got my own postcard today, most should have gotten theirs by now. But no new responses tonight (yet) so still sitting at two other interested people. Just have to wait and see if anyone responds by the weekend. If not my guesstimate of 3 or 4 responses will have been optimistic.Guesstimating maybe 3 or 4 serious responses at most out of 200 postcards.
Three of the five have responded to my emails. One of them is unable to join at this time. Another is swamped with work but says he is still interested and in any case is waiting for more details, such as cost (he does not have a license but would like to learn.)Good to hear it is moving along. I imagine you may just have to choose a time and date for the meeting that overlaps with some of the expressed preferences. I think the expression about cats and trying to move a group of them in one direction also applies to pilots